Antonia

Part 1 - The Girl and the Boy War

Once upon a time lived some girls called  Eva, Holly and Antonia they were all friends. 

One day they met at the park they said “Hello Eva,” 

“Hello Antonia,” 

“Hello Holly.”  

Then they heard bombs exploding everywhere they heard BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! There was a mess everywhere. Then they remembered it was war!  So they decided to go in the war.   First they packed what they needed… but it took a long time.

Part 2 - Time on the Ships

Holly and the nurses, Antonia and Eva were in the tanks as well as shooting.  Then they arrived. 

“Where is everybody?” Holly called.  

“The army people were in the trenches” said Eva.  So they had to build a trench which took a long, long time because it had to fit four people. They were in France.  They made a friend who was called Olivia, she was a very smart girl.  They were in the New Zealand and Australia team.  During the night they would not fight but during the day they would fight.

Part 3 - The fight Begins

Until the sun rose it was quiet, then war began. Things were exploding everywhere.  The guns went  BANG! BANG! BANG! BANG!

Part 4 - New Zealand and Australia 

New Zealand and Australia won!!!

"Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay!"  yelled the nurses and Antonia and Eva.

Part 5 - Going to Gallipoli

The army came with three thousand people, they went in the trenches while we were going to Gallipoli.  People's teeth fell out while they were fighting “It’s o.k. in war,” whispered Antonia.

Two people got killed in the New Zealand team. Liam and Estella got shot in their legs. 

Part 6 - Olivia comes Back.

Olivia came back with all the guns and went back to her friends at Smiggle. Eva and Antonia came back with the tanks.

After the war they became B.F.F. and bought Smiggles together with Olivia and Holly and flatted together.  “We were lucky we didn’t get killed in the war,” said Eva. 

“We’re lucky we became best friends forever,” said Olivia.

In the holiday I went to Nelson for the surf lifesaving carnival.  First we practised for one day . Me, Catarina and Alissa got to go on the sack slide.  First you have to put on a sack then go on the slide.  The sack slide was fantastic!  The next day it was the carnival.  I won first, second and two thirds, then we went home.

By Antonia